Aloha! ʻO Donny koʻu inoa. No Midwest mai au. Anuanu ke anilā. Hauʻoli au, no ka mea, hoʻopau i kēia moʻokiʻika o useduforce. Makemake au i ka moa. Makemake au i ka Popeye’s. He kaʻu punahele Popeye’s. Aloha au i nā ʻōlelo. I kēia manawa, makemake au e ʻai i ka quesadilla moa. Aia ka quesadilla ma ka hale ʻaina Mekiko. ʻAkahi, ʻai au i ka mea ʻai Hawaiʻi. Nehinei, hoʻopau au iā Breaking Bad. I kēia manawa, nānā au iā El Camino. A laila*, nānā au iā Better Call Saul. E ʻōlelo Hawaiʻi kākou i āpau* lā.
*I consulted the dictionary for some unfamiliar words. Two of these, I had a very day time on so it may not make very much sense. E hoʻopololei iaʻu, ke ʻoluʻolu! (I also tried to figure this sentence out on my own, I’m saying iaʻu is for indirect object? And I know that hoʻo- can turn adjectives into verbs so… yeah!)
Aloha e Donny! This looks really good, maika'i loa and congrats on finishing! Makemake pū au i ka quesadilla moa :3 To address your doubts: - "A laila" does work for "and then" :) You can also say "ma hope iho" ("afterwards") - "i *nā* lā apau" would be "every day/all the days." Super close! Just remember that "nā" - Awesome deduction, "ho'opololei" would indeed be the verb "to correct" XD